Writing Out The Storm

22/3/2007 - -untitled-

Through the darkness, I see your eyes
shining with accidental innocence
behind the faced, I watch you
yearning for the decadence
that you were promised
before he let you down again
and beat you back down into submission
he left you crying in the corner
where you waited, for me
to pick up the puzzle
and put your heart back together
so I picked up the pieces of both our lives
and together we built a new heart
one we share
a heart that will never be broken
a heart that shines
with accidental innocence ...

22/3/2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by sillybilly

ahhhhhhhhhh......accidental innocence, how so sweet!!

Good one Raven

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22/3/2007 - Wow!

Posted by deena

Wow Rav!
THAT is so incredibly beautiful and touching! How can you be so eloquent on (it seems) any genre of writing you feel the mood to dabble with? A very impressive piece - (I can’t find the words like you can) but I really loved this one Rav! Don’t ever stop writing! You are far too talented.

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